
Writing like a lawyer is not about filling a page with complicated words, long sentences or Latin expressions. Good legal writing is usually much simpler than that. The real skill is being able to take complicated facts, identify the important legal issues, explain the relevant law accurately, and reach a clear conclusion.
A lawyer may need to write many different types of documents during a career. This might include an email to a client, a legal opinion, a letter before action, a witness statement, a contract, written submissions, a research note or an internal email to a supervisor. Each document has a different purpose, but the underlying principle is the same. The reader should be able to understand what the writer is saying, why it matters and what should happen next.
The best legal writing therefore combines clarity, precision, structure and reasoning. It should make the reader's job easier rather than forcing the reader to work out what the writer means.
Start with the point
One of the most important habits in legal writing is learning to identify the point before starting to write.
Weak legal writing often begins with background information and continues for several paragraphs before reaching the actual issue. A lawyer should normally know what the document is trying to establish before writing it.
For example, imagine a client wants to know whether a contract can be terminated because the other party has failed to deliver goods.
A weak opening might say:
The parties entered into an agreement several months ago relating to the supply of certain goods. Since that time, there have been a number of communications between the parties concerning the delivery arrangements, and various issues have arisen in relation to the performance of the agreement.
This is not necessarily wrong, but it makes the reader wait for the important point.
A clearer version would be:
The issue is whether the buyer is entitled to terminate the contract because the seller has failed to deliver the goods by the agreed date.
The second version immediately tells the reader what the legal question is.
This principle applies particularly well to legal advice. Before writing, ask yourself what the reader actually needs to know. Once that is clear, build the writing around that point.
Know who you are writing for
Lawyers do not write everything in the same way. The appropriate style depends on the audience.
A legal opinion written for another solicitor can use more legal terminology than an email written to a client who has no legal background. A submission to a court will have a different tone from an internal email to a colleague. A contract will be structured differently from a research note.
Consider the difference between these two explanations.
The claimant's cause of action is likely to be defeated by the operation of the limitation period.
That may be perfectly appropriate in advice to another lawyer.
For a client, it may be better to write:
The claim may be out of time. If the court agrees, the claim may not be allowed to proceed.
The second version does not make the law less accurate. It simply communicates the same point in language the client is more likely to understand.
Good legal writing is therefore not about demonstrating how much legal vocabulary you know. It is about communicating effectively with the particular person reading your work.
Be clear about the legal issue
Legal writing becomes much easier once the issue has been identified precisely.
Compare:
There may be an issue concerning the validity of the agreement.
with:
The issue is whether the agreement is enforceable even though the buyer was under 18 when it was made.
The second sentence is stronger because it identifies the actual legal question.
A useful test is to ask whether you could turn your sentence into a question.
Instead of writing:
The defendant's liability is potentially problematic.
Ask:
Is the defendant liable for the claimant's loss?
Instead of:
The question of possession requires consideration.
Ask:
Is the claimant entitled to possession of the property?
This approach forces the writer to identify what the law actually needs to answer.
Separate facts from legal conclusions
Lawyers constantly move between facts and legal analysis. Good writing makes the distinction clear.
Suppose a client says that a contractor left a building site before completing the work. It would be premature to write:
The contractor has breached the contract.
The facts may suggest a breach, but the legal conclusion requires analysis of the contract and the circumstances.
A more careful approach would be:
The contractor stopped work before the agreed completion date. This appears to be a breach of the completion obligation in clause 7, although the contractor may argue that its performance was prevented by the client's failure to provide access to the site.
The first sentence states the fact. The second begins the legal analysis.
This distinction is particularly important because lawyers should avoid presenting assumptions or allegations as established facts.
Instead of:
The employer unlawfully dismissed the employee.
write:
The employee was dismissed after raising a complaint about working conditions. This may give rise to a claim for unfair dismissal, depending on the reason for the dismissal and the employee's eligibility to bring a claim.
The second version is more precise because it distinguishes what is known from what still needs to be established.
State the rule before applying it
Legal writing should normally explain the relevant legal rule before applying it to the facts.
For example:
A contract may be frustrated where an unforeseen event occurs after the contract was formed and makes performance impossible, illegal or radically different from what the parties originally agreed.
The writer can then apply the rule:
Here, the government order prevented the business from operating from the premises for the remainder of the contractual term. This is likely to be sufficiently serious to support an argument that the contract has been frustrated.
The reader can therefore follow the reasoning.
A weaker approach would jump directly from the facts to the conclusion:
The contract has probably been frustrated because the business could not operate from the premises.
The conclusion may be correct, but the legal reasoning is less visible.
A lawyer should make the chain of reasoning easy to follow:
legal rule → relevant facts → application → conclusion
This is essentially the reasoning behind IRAC, although good legal writing does not need to look like a mechanical IRAC exercise.
Use authorities properly
Legal writing often requires statutes and cases. The purpose of an authority is not simply to make the document look more authoritative. It should support the legal proposition being made.
For example:
Under section 2 of the Unfair Contract Terms Act 1977, a person cannot exclude or restrict liability for death or personal injury resulting from negligence.
The authority directly supports the proposition.
Cases should be used in the same way. Instead of simply listing a case name, explain why it matters.
For example:
In Carlill v Carbolic Smoke Ball Co (1893), the court accepted that an advertisement could amount to a unilateral offer capable of acceptance by performance. The case therefore supports the argument that the wording of the advertisement can be legally significant rather than merely promotional.
This is more useful than writing:
The case of Carlill v Carbolic Smoke Ball Co (1893) is relevant.
The reader needs to know what the case establishes and why it matters.
Do not overstate what an authority says
One of the most common problems in legal writing is overstating a case or statute.
A case may establish a particular principle on particular facts. It does not necessarily establish every proposition that happens to resemble those facts.
Compare:
Donoghue v Stevenson (1932) established that manufacturers are always liable for injuries caused by their products.
with:
Donoghue v Stevenson (1932) established the modern neighbour principle in negligence and provided the foundation for the manufacturer's duty of care to consumers in appropriate circumstances.
The second statement is more accurate.
Lawyers should also distinguish between what a court decided, what a judge said, and what a case illustrates.
For example:
The Court of Appeal held that the defendant was liable.
is stronger than:
The case suggests that the defendant might be liable.
The appropriate wording depends on the authority and the proposition being supported.
Use precise legal verbs
Small changes in vocabulary can make legal writing considerably more precise.
A court may hold, find, decide or conclude something.
A party may argue, submit, contend, allege or accept something.
A statute may provide, require, prohibit, permit or impose something.
A contract may require, permit, exclude, limit or create an obligation.
For example:
The claimant says that the defendant breached the contract.
This is understandable, but:
The claimant contends that the defendant breached the contract.
makes clear that this is the claimant's position rather than an established fact.
Similarly:
The judge said that the notice was invalid.
may be better written as:
The judge held that the notice was invalid.
if the court actually made that determination.
Precision in verbs helps the reader understand the status of a statement.
Avoid unnecessary legalese
Writing like a lawyer does not mean writing in unnecessarily complicated language.
Some traditional legal expressions remain useful because they have an established meaning. Others add little.
Compare:
In the event that the defendant fails to comply with the aforementioned obligation, the claimant shall be entitled to take such further action as may be deemed necessary.
with:
If the defendant fails to comply with the obligation, the claimant may take further action.
The second version is easier to read and communicates the same idea.
Words such as "aforementioned", "hereinafter", "pursuant to", "notwithstanding" and "heretofore" should not be used simply because they sound legal. There may be circumstances where a particular expression is appropriate, but ordinary English is usually preferable where it communicates the point just as accurately.
Legal writing should sound professional, not artificially complicated.
Be careful with Latin
Latin terminology can be useful where it has a recognised legal meaning, but it should not be used merely to make writing sound sophisticated.
For example, prima facie, res judicata, ratio decidendi and obiter dicta are established legal concepts.
However, replacing ordinary English with Latin does not automatically make writing better.
Instead of:
The defendant's conduct is prima facie indicative of liability.
you might simply write:
The defendant's conduct provides an initial basis for arguing that he is liable.
The appropriate choice depends on the audience and context.
The goal is precision, not decoration.
Prefer active language where possible
Active sentences are often clearer than passive sentences.
Compare:
The contract was breached by the seller.
with:
The seller breached the contract.
Or:
The documents were reviewed by the solicitor.
with:
The solicitor reviewed the documents.
Passive voice is not wrong. It can be useful where the person responsible is unknown, irrelevant or deliberately not being identified.
For example:
The documents were disclosed to the claimant.
The identity of the person who disclosed them may not matter.
The point is not to eliminate passive voice. It is to avoid using it automatically.
Keep sentences under control
Legal writers sometimes create very long sentences because they are trying to include every qualification, exception and factual detail at once.
For example:
Although the defendant argues that the notice was valid because it was served within the period specified by the agreement, there is a significant question as to whether the notice complied with clause 14, which requires service by recorded delivery and, given that the notice was instead sent by ordinary post, the claimant may have a strong argument that the notice was ineffective.
This can be divided into several sentences:
The defendant argues that the notice was valid because it was served within the contractual period. However, clause 14 requires notices to be sent by recorded delivery. The notice was sent by ordinary post. The claimant therefore has a strong argument that the notice was ineffective.
The second version is much easier to understand.
Short sentences are particularly useful when explaining a complicated legal conclusion.
Use paragraphs to develop one idea
A paragraph should generally have a clear purpose.
A useful structure is to begin with the main point, explain the relevant law or reasoning, apply it to the facts and then move to the next point.
For example:
The buyer is likely to have a claim for breach of contract. The agreement required the seller to deliver the goods by 1 June. The goods were not delivered until 20 June, and no contractual extension was agreed. Unless the seller can establish a contractual or legal justification for the delay, the failure to deliver by 1 June is likely to constitute a breach.
The paragraph has a clear progression. It does not jump between unrelated issues.
This also helps the reader navigate longer documents.
Use headings to guide the reader
Headings are particularly valuable in longer legal documents.
Instead of producing several pages of uninterrupted text, divide the document into logical sections such as:
Background
Issues
Applicable law
Application
Conclusion
For a client advice letter, headings might instead be:
Your position
Your legal options
Risks
Recommended next steps
Headings should help the reader understand the structure of the document rather than simply divide the page into arbitrary sections.
Explain uncertainty properly
Lawyers rarely have the luxury of certainty.
A legal writer therefore needs to communicate uncertainty without becoming vague.
Compare:
You will win the case.
with:
You have a strong argument, but the outcome will depend on whether the court accepts the evidence concerning the agreement.
The second version gives the reader useful information about both the strength of the position and the remaining uncertainty.
Useful expressions include:
likely to
unlikely to
may
is likely to depend on
there is a risk that
there is a strong argument that
the position is less certain where
the court may take the view that
These phrases are not signs of weak writing. They are often signs of accurate legal analysis.
Distinguish legal risk from commercial risk
A lawyer's job is not always to identify whether something is legally possible. The client may also need to know whether taking that legal position makes practical sense.
For example:
The company has a reasonable argument that the supplier breached the contract. However, the likely damages are relatively small and litigation costs could exceed the value of the claim. A negotiated settlement may therefore be commercially preferable.
This is much more useful to a client than simply saying:
The company has a good claim for breach of contract.
Legal writing should help the reader make decisions.
Present both sides of an argument
Good legal writing does not ignore arguments that support the other side.
Suppose a claimant argues that a notice was invalid.
A weak analysis might say:
The notice was invalid because it was not served in accordance with the contract.
A stronger analysis recognises the counterargument:
The claimant has a strong argument that the notice was invalid because it was not served in accordance with clause 14. However, the defendant may argue that the contractual requirement is directory rather than mandatory, particularly because the notice was received by the claimant within the relevant period.
The writer can then assess the competing arguments:
The claimant's position is stronger because clause 14 expressly states that notices must be served by recorded delivery and does not provide an alternative method of service.
This demonstrates analysis rather than merely stating a preferred conclusion.
Do not hide the conclusion
Legal writers sometimes spend several paragraphs analysing an issue without clearly telling the reader what they think the answer is.
The reader should not have to reconstruct the conclusion from the analysis.
For example:
On balance, the claimant is likely to succeed. The contractual wording is clear, the notice was sent by an incorrect method and there is no evidence that the defendant agreed to accept service by email.
The conclusion is clear and supported by the reasoning.
In longer advice, it can be useful to give the conclusion at the beginning and then explain it.
For example:
The buyer is likely to have a claim for breach of contract. The seller failed to deliver the goods by the agreed date and has not identified any contractual provision that excuses the delay. The reasons for this conclusion are set out below.
This allows a busy reader to understand the answer immediately while still having access to the detailed analysis.
Learn to write recommendations
A lawyer's writing should often answer a practical question: what should happen next?
Consider:
The company may have a claim against the former employee for breach of the confidentiality clause.
That identifies a legal position but does not tell the client what to do.
A more useful conclusion might be:
The company has a reasonable basis for alleging breach of the confidentiality clause. The next step should be to review the employee's communications and identify precisely what information was disclosed before deciding whether to send a letter before action.
The second version converts legal analysis into practical advice.
Write differently for different documents
A solicitor may write several documents about the same dispute, but each document will have a different purpose.
A client email should be accessible and practical.
An internal research note may contain detailed legal analysis and extensive authorities.
A letter to the opposing solicitor should be firm, precise and focused on the disputed issues.
Written submissions should present the legal argument systematically and support propositions with appropriate authorities.
A contract should define rights and obligations with precision.
A witness statement should generally focus on the witness's evidence rather than turning into a legal argument.
Writing like a lawyer therefore involves understanding not only what to say, but also why the document is being written.
Write emails like a lawyer
Legal emails are often much shorter than people expect.
Suppose a supervisor asks whether a client has a viable claim.
A poor response might say:
I have had a look at the matter and there are potentially some issues with the claim which I think we should probably look into further before we can really say whether there is a strong chance of success.
A stronger response would be:
I have reviewed the documents. The client appears to have a reasonable claim for breach of contract. The main issue is whether the contractual notice requirement was satisfied. I will review the correspondence on this point and confirm the position.
The second email is clearer, more confident and more useful.
Avoid unnecessary repetition
Legal writing often becomes longer because the writer repeats the same proposition using slightly different words.
For example:
The defendant failed to pay the invoice. The defendant did not make payment of the invoice. The invoice remains unpaid by the defendant.
One statement is enough:
The defendant has not paid the invoice.
Repetition can sometimes be useful for emphasis, but it should be deliberate rather than accidental.
Be precise with dates, numbers and documents
Precision is particularly important when dealing with evidence.
Instead of:
The parties exchanged several emails around this time.
write:
The parties exchanged emails on 3, 5 and 8 March concerning delivery of the goods.
Instead of:
The claimant suffered significant losses.
write:
The claimant incurred £18,500 in additional storage costs between June and August.
Specificity makes legal writing more credible and makes it easier for the reader to assess the argument.
Do not confuse confidence with certainty
A lawyer can write confidently without claiming certainty where certainty does not exist.
Weak:
I am not really sure, but the court might perhaps consider that the clause could potentially be unenforceable.
Better:
The clause is unlikely to be enforceable because it appears to exclude liability for personal injury caused by negligence.
The second sentence is confident while still being appropriately qualified.
Good legal writing does not use unnecessary words to protect the writer from being wrong. It identifies the actual level of uncertainty.
Edit ruthlessly
The first draft is rarely the best draft.
After writing, read the document again and ask whether every sentence is necessary.
For each paragraph, ask:
What is the point of this paragraph?
For each sentence, ask:
Does this sentence help the reader understand the issue, law, evidence, analysis or conclusion?
For each word, ask:
Can I say this more simply without losing legal accuracy?
For example:
In light of the fact that the defendant failed to comply with the requirements of the agreement, it is our view that the claimant is entitled to terminate the contract.
can become:
Because the defendant failed to comply with the agreement, the claimant is entitled to terminate the contract.
The second sentence says the same thing with fewer words.
Editing is one of the most important skills in legal writing because clarity often comes from removing unnecessary material rather than adding more.
A complete example of legal analysis
Consider the following scenario.
A customer purchases a laptop from a retailer. The laptop develops a serious fault after two weeks. The retailer refuses to provide a refund and says that the customer must deal directly with the manufacturer.
A weak piece of legal writing might say:
The customer should be able to get a refund because the laptop was faulty and the retailer is responsible. The retailer cannot just tell the customer to go to the manufacturer because the customer bought it from the retailer.
This may identify the basic problem, but it does not demonstrate much legal reasoning.
A stronger version would be:
The customer is likely to have a remedy against the retailer because the laptop appears not to have conformed to the statutory requirements applicable to goods supplied to consumers. The relevant rights arise against the retailer, rather than the manufacturer, because the retailer was the party that supplied the laptop under the consumer contract. The fact that the manufacturer may have provided the laptop does not ordinarily remove the retailer's statutory obligations to the customer. The precise remedy will depend on the nature of the fault, when it was discovered and whether the statutory conditions for exercising the relevant remedy have been satisfied.
This version is stronger because it identifies the legal relationship, states the relevant principle, applies it to the facts and recognises that the precise remedy requires further analysis.
Example of improving a legal paragraph
Here is another example.
Weak:
It is our opinion that there is a possibility that the employee could perhaps bring a claim against the employer because of the fact that he was dismissed after making his complaint, although obviously this will depend on what the employer's actual reason for dismissing him was and whether there is enough evidence to show that the complaint was the reason.
Improved:
The employee may have a claim if the dismissal was connected to his complaint. The key issue is the employer's reason for dismissal. If the evidence indicates that the complaint materially influenced the decision, the employee may have a strong claim. The available correspondence and the employer's stated reasons for dismissal should therefore be reviewed before advising on the prospects of success.
The improved version removes hesitation, separates the issues and identifies the evidence that matters.
Example of writing to a client
Suppose a client asks whether they should bring proceedings against a former business partner.
A poor answer might be:
There are various legal options available to you in relation to this matter and it may be possible to commence proceedings against your former business partner depending on the circumstances, although there are a number of factors which would need to be considered before any decision is made.
A better answer would be:
You may have a claim against your former business partner, but I would not recommend starting proceedings yet. We first need to establish exactly what the partnership agreement required and what losses you have suffered. We should also consider the likely legal costs and whether a negotiated settlement is possible.
This is how lawyers should communicate with clients. The client wants to know the position, the uncertainty, and what should happen next.
Example of writing an argument
Legal writing becomes particularly important when presenting an argument.
Weak:
The defendant's argument is wrong because the contract clearly says that payment had to be made by 1 June.
Stronger:
The defendant's argument is inconsistent with the express terms of the contract. Clause 8 requires payment by 1 June and does not provide for an extension where the defendant experiences cash-flow difficulties. The defendant therefore cannot rely on its financial difficulties as a contractual justification for the late payment.
The second version does more than disagree. It explains why the argument fails.
The difference between sounding like a lawyer and writing like a lawyer
There is an important distinction between the two.
Someone can sound like a lawyer by using words such as "pursuant", "aforementioned", "notwithstanding" and "hereinafter". That does not necessarily mean that the person is communicating effectively.
Writing like a lawyer means something different.
It means identifying the relevant issue.
It means distinguishing facts from assumptions.
It means stating the law accurately.
It means using authority properly.
It means applying the law to the facts.
It means recognising arguments on both sides.
It means explaining uncertainty honestly.
It means reaching a conclusion.
And, where appropriate, it means telling the reader what should happen next.
The strongest legal writers can make complicated legal issues appear straightforward because they have done the difficult analytical work before putting the words on the page.
How to practise writing like a lawyer
One of the best ways to improve is to take a legal problem and explain it in three stages.
First, write the answer in one sentence.
For example:
The buyer is likely to have a claim because the seller failed to deliver the goods by the contractual deadline.
Second, identify the legal rule that supports the answer.
A party may be liable for breach of contract where it fails to perform an obligation required by the agreement.
Third, apply the rule to the facts.
The agreement required delivery by 1 June, but the seller did not deliver until 20 June and has provided no contractual justification for the delay.
You now have the basic structure of a legal analysis.
You can then improve it by adding the relevant statutory provision or case authority, addressing the strongest counterargument and explaining the practical consequence.
Another useful exercise is to take a paragraph from a legal textbook or judgment and rewrite it in plain English without losing the legal meaning. This teaches you to distinguish essential legal concepts from unnecessary complexity.
It is also useful to edit your own work aggressively. Remove repeated words. Shorten long sentences. Replace vague expressions with specific ones. Check every legal proposition against the relevant authority. Then read the document as though you were the person receiving it rather than the person who wrote it.
A simple checklist for legal writing
Before sending a piece of legal writing, ask yourself whether the reader can immediately identify the issue, understand the relevant law, see how the law applies to the facts and understand your conclusion.
Check that you have distinguished established facts from allegations and assumptions. Make sure your authorities actually support the propositions for which you have cited them. Remove unnecessary legal jargon and Latin. Check that your sentences are not unnecessarily long. Replace vague expressions with precise ones. Make sure your conclusion is clear and, where appropriate, explain what the reader should do next.
Most importantly, ask yourself whether the document makes the legal reasoning easier to understand.
Conclusion
Writing like a lawyer is not about making simple English sound complicated. It is about making legal reasoning clear.
A good legal writer takes a complicated problem and gives it structure. The writer identifies the issue, explains the law, uses the relevant authority, applies the law to the facts, recognises uncertainty and reaches a reasoned conclusion.
The best legal writing is therefore not necessarily the longest or most sophisticated. It is the writing that allows the reader to understand the problem, the law, the argument and the answer without unnecessary effort.
That is the real skill behind writing like a lawyer. The objective is not to impress the reader with difficult language. The objective is to make the reasoning so clear that the reader can see exactly how you reached your conclusion.


